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I live in a world
With no ground beneath my feet
And no air to breathe.
©2006-2008 ~cheshireflare
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My first serious stab at a haiku. Yay, or something.
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~ordie:iconordie: Dec 3, 2006, 4:33:46 PM
Where's the kigo! :( You not-so-traditionalist you. :(

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"As if poetry were a craft that there is a right way or wrong way to do: in which case, I prefer the wrong way -- anything better than the well-wrought epiphany of predictable measure --for at least the cracks and flaws show signs of life. ”
~cheshireflare:iconcheshireflare: Dec 3, 2006, 11:58:11 PM
Eh? Cujo? The dog? >.>

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"I was working on the proof of one of my poems all the morning, and took out a comma. In the afternoon I put it back again." - Oscar Wilde
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